Wednesday, March 16, 2022

Kidnapping School

 
Episode 1: Advertisement

Ta da dan! ta da dan!! tada dan!!!

JD - "Kata ho bhai timro ghar? Yetai tira bata wuthako jasto thyo timlai."

kta - "Yetai tira ho, tyo agadi ko seto ghar cha ni thulo, nilo sisaa vako, tei ho."

JD - "Teita, asti rati adhyaro ma wuthako diuso ta aauda ta kaa ho kaa vaira. haha. La bhai, take care garnu ani hamro service kasto lagyo app ma rating dina chai na birsinu."

kta - "5 star ho ni dai rating ta. Arko pali group package linchu. Ma ra mero sathi haru sangai aauncham. Ani pubg hannu parcha hai dai sangai feri."

JD - "haha la bhai la, chicken dinner garnu parcha"

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JD - "Schedule ma koi cha aru herta aaaja?"
TK - "Chaina dai, Office jum dai, aaja kantipur ma hamro ad premier aauni cha ni ta JD"
JD - "Ann ta sale, ghuma ghuma chito vaga. Boss le marcha feri"

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Karma Jhyaple - "Tetro paisa kharcha garera ad banayo khai ta kaile dekhauncha yo khate haru le."

JD - "Aauncha dai aauncha tension nalinu, jati kharcha vako cha tesko double wuthaunu parcha return ma"

Karma - "haha wuthaune nai kaam ho hamro khatra sabda khelais ta, Jamindar."

JD (man manai) - "JD vannu vaneko dai lai, jaile jamindar vancha, jamin jati sab bank le khai sakyo, k ko jamindar hunu aba"

TV: "K tapai ko dusman police sanga daraudaina?..."

"Aayo aayo"

"Chup chup sunna de"

TV: 

    Rajesh Hamal: "... K tapai ko sathi lai wusko budi le muthi ma rakhya cha? K tapai ko boyfriend arkai kt sanga chakkar chalaudai cha? K tapai ko boss le tapai lai chutti didaina? Aba bhagwan lai haina hamlai vannus, hami wuthaune chau tapai ko dukha lai. Tapai le khoje jastai package deal tyo pani market mai sabse kam firouti rate ma. Ghar batai pickup, Ghar mai delivery. Tension liney jamana gayo guys, tension diney jamana ho yo, hamlai dinus tapai ko tension. Hami ho tapai kai `Samparka Huna Sakyo Agency`. App aajai download garnus. Phone number tipi halnus. QR code scan gari halnus"

Sabai - "yeaaaaaa, eh nachyo nachyo nachyooo"


World Building

1. Rating given by kidnapped hostage after being freed. 

2. If rating is not good enough parents will call the police instead

3. Price negotiation

4. Competition amongst other kidnapping agencies

5. Price packages

6. Being used as baby sitter.

7. Story of a school teaching how to kidnap, how to earn good ratings from hostages.

8. One of the most tax paying industry.

9. Advertisements of facilities for hostages. 

10. Abroad branches. Good agencies have reaches beyond the country.

11. Vacation kidnap packages.

12. Couples packages.

13. family packages.

14. Better at finding lost people than police.

15. Police kidnap agencies.

16. Hostages make demands packages.

17. 5 star hotel packages.

18. One way and Return packages.


Story building Story line

1. Main hero is a unpaid kidnap hostage. (abandoned child)

2. Runs a kidnap agency and is a lecturer/trainer

3. A kidnap goes wrong. 

4. A hostage goes missing. 

5. The whole kidnap industry is in shambles.

6. Court case?

7. A bigger conspiracy?

8. Another competing agency was framing us to be the no 1?


Revealed Villain Story line

1. Traditional Kidnapping gang. 

2. Trying to bring back the terror, risk and money of kidnapping.

3. Failing horribly against these modern agencies.

4. Main Villain Wants to earn money and Travel Dubai


Ending

1. Main Villain is kidnapped by the hero and when the villain wakes up, he finds himself in Dubai.

2. This was done after Hero finds out about the missing kid and their kidnappers, big fight breaks through.

3. Villain realizes this modern kidnapping is not too bad after all and accepts changes.